W.A.L.T write a recount about an idea we had in our writers notebook
Success Criteria- Co constructed
we need our plan beside us to look at our ideas
make sure it's true and it makes sense
put it in the right order
use descriptive words - e.g. enormous, giant, speechless, flabbergasted etc
proof reading ask someone else to read it
use a dictionary / thesaurus - make your writing more interesting to draw the reader in
use the highlighter strategy - gold for goal and pink for think
It took 20 mins to get to Movieworld... I was getting car sick. When we reached our destination, we could see tonnes of cars! My Dad dropped Mum and I off while he went to find a car park! Mum and I walked over to see a Bold guy standing around grabbing the tickets from the innocent people! (He is suppose to do that) He was snatching them almost RIPPING them! He then gave us what we wanted! We made it to Movie World! I know you would be wondering what happend to dad... We waited for him to meet up with us!
We took our first step of freedom! It felt........................normal.
I don't know why it felt normal, because I was excited and bored at the same time!
The first thing I saw was the green lantern roller coaster..... It looked creepy. I then looked and walked away from it. We then ran into a cinema! It was Rio in 4D version. (If you don't know what Rio is, it is a movie about some Blue Macaws who are looking for a home!) 4D is where your seats move and spray water.
It is really realistic, it is like your in the movie! It is also in 3D mode and you get to wear some 3D glasses! It is mainly just 3D with moving chairs and spray! (The movies and the rides are free)
Then I walked out, still with a dry body! We walked around looking for something else to do.... That was when we walked into the SCOOBY-DOO RIDE! Dad said "it is an excellent ride!" I took a chance and hopped into it... It took 30 minutes to hop onto the ride! First there were loud noises, then there were models of monsters with scooby inside a knights armor and said "MONSTERS, HIDE"... I was confused.... It wasn't so bad, right after that...We fell down backwards then it went side to side, roughly! Then I started to cry! ;( Right after that, it stopped. I then hopped out and ran to Mum crying!
A few hours later.... Ok maybe I should skip to the last ride I went on..... (I went on lots of other rides, I am just skipping some) so the last ride I went on was the WILD-WEST RIDE! Dad has never been on it before but he said it would be cool! I was anxious because of the last coaster I went on, the seats were boats! I hopped in then we set off! It was really relaxing, untill we went up high! We then watched a little clip, of cowboys shooting! When it was over, we then turned around and went backwards AGAIN! I then panicked and burst into tears.
When it almost ended, we went up all the way to the top...............
We actually waited for a parade! The parade is where we see some movie characters like the Joker or the Flash or maybe Cat woman? I saw all of them! It was fantastic! Right after that, I left! Right when I said "I wanna get a cape..." I crashed into a cape stand :|
Mum called out to me and said "watch out Jhaz!" I stepped back gazing at the capes. I wanted to get one, but they cost $50 dollars. Lucky me! I got the original Batman cape..... Please do NOT say I am a boy D:<
Dad then went to pick up the car while we looked at the plushies on the stand. Dad returned with the car, Mum walked to the car while I was slouching.... I ended up crashing into the car! I don't really pay attention to these things. I hopped into the car, Dad drove us home. We walked inside my Aunties house and told my Cousins, Uncle, Auntie and Grandpa, my amazing story about MOVIEWORLD!